Wednesday, February 21, 2007

I Remember

This is an excuse of a song(more a verse) that I wrote on request. Jax, the requestor(?!!) will be composing the music for the same. Why? Well he is much more musically inclined than a head-banging girl penning verses that can never ever be sung :D

This is just version 2 of the "song"[Jax will mail you ver 3!]. I already have an idea for penning a chorus and modifying the lyrics to make it fit the suit of tunes. But that is for another day.
For now, this shall be.

I remember the shine of your eyes –
In the sunlit waves
Rushing towards me,
Caressing my feet.
A tease, a taunt;
Whispering invites
to a new world beyond.

I remember the tinkle of your laughter –
In the pattering of raindrops
On my window pane;
Wanting to join my conversations
Of Keats & Doors
Discussed in the same breath.

I remember the calluses of your hands –
In the pebbles in our garden
Mindlessly kicked around,
As I walked in circles,
Searching outside
For all that I lost within.

I remember your absence –
In the pain of silence
emboldened and enhanced,
As we remain lost
in a kaleidoscope of images
painted by our dreams.

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Blogger jax said...

Lady K! I am still working on it. I hate my own vocals in it. So I am feeling full shy and all to mail you. Will mail you version 1 of only the music without vocals.

3:26 AM  
Anonymous jax said...

I see you have changed the "us"es to "me". How selfish da!:D

6:50 AM  
Blogger Primalsoup said...

K, engayo poyittai! :)

12:31 PM  
Blogger Kumari said...

@Jax: Will you send the moozic quick? And i changed it to make more sense when you sing it :p

@Soups: Thanks :D

9:37 AM  

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