I Remember
This is just version 2 of the "song"[Jax will mail you ver 3!]. I already have an idea for penning a chorus and modifying the lyrics to make it fit the suit of tunes. But that is for another day.
For now, this shall be.
I remember the shine of your eyes –
In the sunlit waves
Rushing towards me,
Caressing my feet.
A tease, a taunt;
Whispering invites
to a new world beyond.
I remember the tinkle of your laughter –
In the pattering of raindrops
On my window pane;
Wanting to join my conversations
Of Keats & Doors
Discussed in the same breath.
I remember the calluses of your hands –
In the pebbles in our garden
Mindlessly kicked around,
As I walked in circles,
Searching outside
For all that I lost within.
I remember your absence –
In the pain of silence
emboldened and enhanced,
As we remain lost
in a kaleidoscope of images
painted by our dreams.
4 Comments:
Lady K! I am still working on it. I hate my own vocals in it. So I am feeling full shy and all to mail you. Will mail you version 1 of only the music without vocals.
I see you have changed the "us"es to "me". How selfish da!:D
K, engayo poyittai! :)
@Jax: Will you send the moozic quick? And i changed it to make more sense when you sing it :p
@Soups: Thanks :D
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